Planning - Final Idea!

Our groups final idea is a mix between Nathaniel’s initial idea and Clinton’s intial idea.  We have indefinitely that the title will be called Last Note.  There will be two scene in the opening. It will start off with the main character, who is grieving over his long term girlfriend who was killed one year ago. He is seen in the opening writing on a notepad what appears to be a suicide note hence the name ‘Last Note’. As he is writing note he sees the article from the day after his wife died, which sets off a flashback. After this flashback he appears to be in more distress and bring out a noose. At this stage he is still contemplating whether to go through with the suicide or not, he ties the noose and hangs it from the ceiling, the scene ends with him putting the noose around his head, but doesn’t show what exactly happens.

The next scene takes place in a graveyard, there will be an establishing shots which will follow straight after the previous scene. A large portion of this scene will be made of  establishing shots of the graveyard, then will show someone approaching a gravestone. The audience does not yet know whether the character from the previous scene is dead or not. As the person places the flowers down, the camera will pan up revealing that its the person from the previous scene and that he is still alive.